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Title: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on May 17, 2009, 10:46:51 PM
This thing again. First of all, the main fiction section (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=thprose) of my site, which contains:


Second of all, shorts, and not-quite-so-shorts but which don't have any other place (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=thshorts). They are too numerous and varied to list here, that's what the index page is for to begin with.

Finally, Articles on Gensokyo (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=gensokyo), providing more in-character and out-of-character stuff, ranging from a list of romantic pairings in my stories in order of plausability with respect to canon (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=swaromance) to a Gensokyo Chronicle article on the inaccurately-named "Pride of Youkai" (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=prideyoukai). Oh, also, reviews (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=threvs).

I was, of course, waiting until I had something new to release before I made this thread. So here's a short titled Alice Illness (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=aliceill). Funny coincidence, I seem to have come down with something when I was finishing this up ...
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Tengukami on May 17, 2009, 11:10:05 PM
Alice hogtied naked to a bed is one ... evokative image. That was a sweet story. Liked the Simpsons reference in there, too.
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on May 17, 2009, 11:13:50 PM
Spreadeagled, not hogtied. Hogtied would be her wrists and ankles all bound to each other. But yeah. |3
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Tengukami on May 17, 2009, 11:22:45 PM
Quote from: KimikoMuffin on May 17, 2009, 11:13:50 PM
Spreadeagled, not hogtied. Hogtied would be her wrists and ankles all bound to each other. But yeah. |3

Whoops! Freudian slip on my part there, heh. Hm.
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: [K]KoaMeow on May 20, 2009, 01:08:40 PM
Nice story, Kimiko.

I loved it.
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on May 22, 2009, 08:00:26 AM
Okay, so, uh, *cough* I didn't realize/remember that Renko could also tell time by looking at the sky, so I added references to that in A Different Story of an Eastern Wonderland, and a couple of other minor cleanup-thingies as well. After much deliberation, I have also given it a Japanese name: 東方夢境界 (Touhou Yumekyoukai), or "Oriental Dream Boundary"); as well as Perfect Square, which gets 東方古帰国 (Touhou Kokikoku, or "Oriental Old Home").
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on June 13, 2009, 04:00:59 PM
And now I have started adding logos for the stories. Last night I finished the logo for:

(http://i174.photobucket.com/albums/w88/KimikoMuffin/diffstory1.png)
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: WRATHIE_Beatrice on June 13, 2009, 04:29:55 PM
i like ur font.. sauce, muffin?
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on June 13, 2009, 04:47:51 PM
That'd be from the Epson collection (http://www.i-love-epson.co.jp/download2/printer/driver/win/page/ttf30.htm). The English text uses EPSON-FUTO-GYOSHO, and the kanji is EPSON-KAISHO.

I was going for a similar look to the PCB logo. I would've used the exact same fonts ZUN used, but they turned out to be only for sale.
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on August 30, 2009, 07:24:01 AM
A Different Story of an Eastern Wonderland: Chapter 3 (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=diffstory3).
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: WRATHIE_Beatrice on August 30, 2009, 01:56:24 PM
right, right...
in process of reading this..

Manipulation of destruction is kinda hax

and i see you're trying to add Bamboo Forest being having some Time Hax. more details required muffin or it won't stack, as it is not canon nor really explained, yo!


EDIT:
Done with it, reasonable short but okay.
I like the way you phrased how they got funny colored hair.

and.. Everyone is gay in Gensokyo.

Although, Keine being like that makes me irk.
but still..

good job muffin
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on August 30, 2009, 03:57:11 PM
Actually, it is (http://touhou.wikia.com/wiki/Perfect_Memento:_Memorandum) canon (http://touhou.wikia.com/wiki/Changeability_of_Strange_Dream:_Story). (The hax, however, is presumably on Maribel's part, not that of the Bamboo Forest.)

And no, everyone's bi in Gensokyo, it's just Mokou (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=thcomic19&c=bd84073g5) who's gay.
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: WRATHIE_Beatrice on August 30, 2009, 04:03:46 PM
ah right, i'll read that when ... i have the time to.. work soon.

Mokou's been gay is fine, i mean... goodness knows i pair her with Keine half the time
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on September 18, 2009, 07:20:08 PM
Here's a short titled Curse of the Heavens (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=coth). I pretty much just banged it all out at once, with a break in between. I was, like, driven, man.

I've also done a little bit of cleanup work on Perfect Square; the most major changes are that the flashback to SoEW now has the last two stages taking place in Makai (like they do in, y'know, the game), and Byakuren gets mentioned.
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Alfred F. Jones on September 18, 2009, 08:10:48 PM
You know, I don't exactly frequent your site (I'm not one for Walfas comics, just a preference)-- but that was quite good for a short piece. Everything was set up nicely for the events of IN, and all the little references made me giggle. And it had Yoriyori in it. Well done.

And now I remember that I read Enlightened Mind's Eye a while ago and would like to see it continue... hmm, let's see what else is here.

Subterranean Dolls... rofl Marisa got owned
Yuka's Love...
Yay! Selfcest!
Seihou4koma is the best thing on the site. /Hiranofag
I see a Koishi fic. I'll have to come back to this later~

These are why Muffin is the Puntasm stage boss.

... :V
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Gpop on September 18, 2009, 08:13:31 PM
Quote from: Rurogi Shiki on September 18, 2009, 08:10:48 PM
I see a Koishi fic. I'll have to come back to this later~

Oh god that fic was win because of Flan x Koishi, especially in the end.
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on September 20, 2009, 03:44:14 AM
Another short. Admittedly, it's a bit late. The Great Fairy Caper: Catness Side-Story (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=fairycaper).
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Tengukami on September 20, 2009, 06:16:30 AM
Quote from: KimikoMuffin on September 20, 2009, 03:44:14 AM
Another short. Admittedly, it's a bit late. The Great Fairy Caper: Catness Side-Story (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=fairycaper).

Your fiction is really good, Muffin. Everything new thing I read is better than the last. This one really came to life for me. Thanks.
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on September 25, 2009, 04:44:20 AM
Enlightened Mind's Eye: Aboveground Incursion 1 (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=mindeye-sa1)

I admit I'm a bit hesitant about this, insofar as it's pretty much basically just one long action sequence ...

*glances towards Shrine of Gensokyo* ... um, y'know what, never mind.
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on October 10, 2009, 04:14:46 PM
Curse of the Heavens, part 2 (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=coth2).

I thought it would be somewhat apropos. (Interesting fact: this is the first story I've made which takes place at the same time it was written.)
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on October 27, 2009, 06:58:57 AM
(http://i174.photobucket.com/albums/w88/KimikoMuffin/changed.jpg?t=1278733896)
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: An Odd Sea Slug on October 27, 2009, 07:16:11 AM
What the hell does the pic mean?
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Bias Bus on October 27, 2009, 07:36:27 AM
Perhaps it's saying something about Makai...maybe asking if anything has changed there since the events of MS?

I only say this because of the background itself...whatever.

Even so, said pic still gives me this weird feeling inside, the good kind instead of the usual grimdark bad.
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on November 27, 2009, 07:40:13 PM
(http://i174.photobucket.com/albums/w88/KimikoMuffin/ufo.png) (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=ufo)
Prologue (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=ufo0)
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on December 14, 2009, 04:07:38 AM
Redefined Fantastic Object: Chapter 1 (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=ufo1)
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on February 19, 2010, 06:39:22 PM
Redefined Fantastic Object: Chapter 2 (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=ufo2)
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on January 13, 2011, 09:11:33 PM
Okay, I know it's been ages, but I am still, believe it or not, Doing Stuff. Now let's try an experiemnt!

A Different Story of an Eastern Wonderland: Chapter 4 (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=diffstory4)

Interlude: The Previous Night

Sakuya led Flandre down the stairs and into the basement. The younger of the two Scarlet sisters was allowed to do whatever and go wherever she liked in the basement, and nobody would bother her or indeed even visit very much, provided that she stayed down there and didn't try to bother anyone outside of the basement.

Flandre wasn't stupid. She knew perfectly well that the reason for this was to protect the world at large from her. Ironically, she had come to this realization relatively recently, now that her psychotically destructive tendencies were dying down.

First, Remilia had hired Kaguya and Mokou as tutors, since they could survive ... things. They'd gotten as far as teaching her that it was better to use non-lethal danmaku, and to at least consider "other people" as a concept. Then Koishi had shown up, used her control over the subconscious to prevent Flandre from vaporizing her, and then ...

... well, and then stole Flandre's heart, really, insofar as someone with the mentality of a twelve-year-old girl (with "five-hundred-year-old vampire" modifiers) could seriously be said to be "in love," and the reverse was true as well. Koishi had sealed her Third Eye shut in order to escape the fear and hatred most people had of the satori species, and this had closed her heart away. Her encounter with Flandre had opened it again.1 (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=diffstory4#footnote_1)

more ... (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=)
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Serena on January 14, 2011, 12:05:22 AM
Yay Muffinfiction~
Always worth the wait.

I'm enjoying this story in particular.
Time for a Mari danmaku training montage
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on May 26, 2011, 02:52:10 AM
Hey, it's only been four months this time. (Also, as I said there, I made some slight changes to the previous chapters; in particular, I changed "Han" to "Hearn" because it's just been bugging me.)


A Different Story of an Eastern Wonderland: Chapter 5 (http://dizzy.pestermom.com/?p=diffstory5)

"What?" said Maribel.

Yukari Yakumo smiled. "Hmm, yes," she said. "I suppose you could say it's a timeframe which resides on the border of 'long enough' and 'quick enough.' It will certainly be an interesting duel, regardless."

Marisa grumbled under her breath. "Why?" she exclaimed.

Yukari glanced at Marisa, then turned back to Maribel. "Voluntarily opening a hole in the Hakurei Border separating our two worlds? Accidentally dropping in is one thing, but making your own hole in it is no mean feat," she said.

Renko furrowed her brow. "But ... you show up on our side all the time."

"Well, yes, I can do it easily," said Yukari, mock-impatiently. "My power is the manipulation of any kind of boundary. But for two girls fooling around with crystals? One might say it should be nearly impossible."
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Nosebleed on May 26, 2011, 03:26:48 AM
Bookmarked your website.  It's pretty nice!  I enjoyed the YuyukoXYoumu short.

Plus, were you the one who wrote that CYOA on DS?
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on May 26, 2011, 03:53:22 AM
No; all my stuff is findable on my site. The only thing remotely CYOA-ish is Create.swf Adventures.
Title: Re: Fiction by KimikoMuffin
Post by: nolrai2 on June 22, 2011, 02:22:17 AM
Quote from: WRATHIE_Beatrice on August 30, 2009, 01:56:24 PM
Although, Keine being like that makes me irk.

Like what?

(Is this kind of necroing okay? Sorry! if its not.)