Maidens of the Kaleidoscope
~Hakurei Shrine~ => Patchouli's Scarlet Library => Topic started by: flyingflames13 on January 26, 2015, 06:24:50 PM
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Keep in mind this is intentionally bad, i'm a pretty okay writer. (It helps that i have little knowledge about Touhou)
So wun day raymoo wus goin 2 murisahs hows so dey culd hang owt n stuf, but den da evil bad clown man frum Teh Durk Nite showd up an startid kilen teh 2hus!
"u wuna no how i got dese scars?" he askd surno
"nu" surno sed bak
"2 bad, my fathr wus a drinkr an a feend wun nite he wen crazr den ushal an den he put the nife in my mowf an sed "y so srs"" he sed 2 surno b4 stebin hur!
Raymoo was liek "o nu i mus help al da 2hus!" She floo towords him an shoot danmaku but he doj the danmaku an frow a nife at raymoo's nek but murisah frew herslf in teh way an get stebd!
"nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!" raymoo cried out wif murisahs ded body in hur hends. she felt a hend on hur shuldur, an hurd a voys say
"lemme taek car uf hem wel u go halp ur frend"
it wus betmen! he arested jokr an frew him in jale. betmen den heeld murisah wif his betmen gajits.
"fank u" raymoo sed but betmen wus alredy gon
Teh end!
I think i lost a few brain cells writing that.
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Terrible, but way too brief.
I think we've had a couple contests here for intentionally bad Touhou fanfiction. Something like a "Stuffed Owl" contest (https://vulpeslibris.wordpress.com/2010/03/03/the-stuffed-owl-an-anthology-of-bad-verse-selected-and-arranged-by-d-b-wyndham-lewis-and-charles-lee/), only for fanfics. I wouldn't mind another one of those, to be honest.
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Terrible, but way too brief.
I think we've had a couple contests here for intentionally bad Touhou fanfiction. Something like a "Stuffed Owl" contest (https://vulpeslibris.wordpress.com/2010/03/03/the-stuffed-owl-an-anthology-of-bad-verse-selected-and-arranged-by-d-b-wyndham-lewis-and-charles-lee/), only for fanfics. I wouldn't mind another one of those, to be honest.
I could probably write something longer and even worse if i had a little time. The reason i wrote this so short is because a good amount of crappy fanfics aren't long because the author is a lazy 10-13 year old child.
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What is this, /r/touhoujerk?
I think we've had a couple contests here for intentionally bad Touhou fanfiction. Something like a "Stuffed Owl" contest (https://vulpeslibris.wordpress.com/2010/03/03/the-stuffed-owl-an-anthology-of-bad-verse-selected-and-arranged-by-d-b-wyndham-lewis-and-charles-lee/), only for fanfics. I wouldn't mind another one of those, to be honest.
Yes, please.
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What is this, /r/touhoujerk?
http://www.reddit.com/r/Touhoujerk/
I'll be damned, it's an actual thing
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I don't usually comment in here much, but something tells me that you probably really shouldn't have done this as a first impression - "intentionally bad" and downplaying yourself is extremely overdone and now this is the only piece of writing anyone here can use reference to vouch for your "okay writing skills".
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I'm working on a story right now actually, i'll post the first chapter when it's finshed.
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lol that's pretty bad.
Hey, would you mind if I made a video version of this story?
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i love this story.
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Nice, but I think that it could have used some stale memes.
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I think we've had a couple contests here for intentionally bad Touhou fanfiction. Something like a "Stuffed Owl" contest (https://vulpeslibris.wordpress.com/2010/03/03/the-stuffed-owl-an-anthology-of-bad-verse-selected-and-arranged-by-d-b-wyndham-lewis-and-charles-lee/), only for fanfics. I wouldn't mind another one of those, to be honest.
I'd love to see intentionally terrible fiction that doesn't have correspondingly atrocious spelling and grammar. That way, we could enjoy terrible narrative concepts while being unencumbered by illegibility :V
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lol that's pretty bad.
Hey, would you mind if I made a video version of this story?
I would be more than glad for you to do that, would be the best if crudely made in Gmod
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" The worst touhou fanfic you will ever read"
Far (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6482251/1/Reimu-fights-the-bad-guys-of-adrkness) from (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4778533/1/Attrack_of_th_eyokai) it. (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4675977/1/Unintended_Words)